Within

Within

By Daniel Brothers



For my brother Robby,

“I left a steady plane for worlds of uncertainty 
I miss the sureness of my feet, but god…
...what wonders there are to see” 


Setting: Two adjoining bathrooms, A mirror frame splits the stage perpendicular to the audience. Two sinks face each other through the mirror. Stall doors are hung like melting clocks in the background. 

Notation: @X:XX references a time signature in the song 

Characters: 

Girl: A freshman girl with tears painted down her face
Guy: A Junior guy with tears painted up his face
Song: The lyrics to the song Within, By Daft Punk



[Lights up, they are dim and dirty. A moment of silence]. 

[Within By Daft Punk begins to play] 

[A girl enters stage left and faces the audience]

[A guy enters stage right and faces the audience] 

[They turn to the mirror and walk slowly towards it.] 

[They grip the sink and breath heavily taking in their features]

@0:43 The light breaks from the dim dirty shadows to show two different emotional states on either side of the stage. Neither positive. 

@0:53 Girl recoils back from the mirror and falls to the floor, Guy doubles down and grits his teeth staring deeper into the glass. This holds 

Song: There are so many things that I don’t understand

[Guy’s smile becomes pained as he turns his face into his downstage shoulder, shame.] 

Song: There’s a whirlwind in me that I can not explain

[guy rolls head slowly spinning to sitting, perched on his legs, facing the audience]
[Girl slowly spins up and faces the mirror]

Song: Many rooms to explore but the doors look the same

[Guy looks off stage left as girl approaches the mirror]

Song: I am lost I can’t even remember my name

[Girl recoils from mirror, guy pulls himself from the floor. Both run to face the audience mirrored on the stage]

Song: Hiding for sometime, looking for someone, I need to know now, Please tell me who I am

[ They dance in mirrored ballet, Back and forth. In and out. And then grasp their head and roatate]

Song: Hiding for sometime, looking for someone, I need to know now, Please tell me who I am

[ They run Up stage, away from center stage, down stage, and then to center stage facing each other in the mirror. ]

@1:52.5 Lights shift to blur the two halves of the stage. Both grab the mirror frame and look closer into the mirror

Song: There are so many things that I don’t understand 

[Guy pulls away, sharing his own struggles, the girl is pulled partly through the mirror wishing to follow, guy returns]

Song: there’s a whirlwind in me that I cannot explain

[Girl pulls away, sharing her own struggles, the guy is pulled partly through the mirror wishing to help, but unable. The girl returns]

Song: Many rooms to explore but the doors look the same

[ They press hands against each other through the mirror pane, and slowly lean into it, breaking at the echo of the song]

Song: I am lost I can’t even remember my name

[ they walk downstage and then together, grasping each other and rotating to switch sides of the stage]

Song: Hiding for sometime, looking for someone, I need to know now, Please tell me who I am (first and second) 

[ They repeat the moves from before, but on their new sides of the stage]

Song: Hiding for sometime, looking for someone, I need to know now, Please tell me who I am (third) 

[ They break form and grab each others head as you would someone you held for a kiss, holding the other this way at arms length. They rotate slowly back to their sides of the stage. They dance slowly up wanting to part]

Song: Hiding for sometime, looking for someone, I need to know now, Please tell me who I am (fourth)

[looking at each other they smile knowing something has changed, and whipe the tears from each others face.] 

[they both walk back to their respective bathrooms, looking through the mirror fondly over their shoulder as they walk offstage. Lights fade slowly to black]


End