Hello there

Hello there

By Daniel Brothers



For my brother Robby,

“I left a steady plane for worlds of uncertainty 
I miss the sureness of my feet, but god…
...what wonders there are to see” 

Note: This show Should be roughly 8 minutes and cast actors skilled in improv. 

At Rise: A park bench with some bushes behind it, obscuring the backgroun. The lights fade up. 

[Jeremy enters from stage left, he sits nervously. Checks his watch. He is dressed like one would for a first date after a period of having no first dates.]

[Mary enters from stage right, Takes note of Jeremy. She is dressed in a similar and coincidentally matching fashion]

[the following exchange occurs after 1-2 minutes of wordless exchange]

Jeremy: Are you Mary?

Mary: Yes. Jeremy? 

Jeremy: next Tuesday? 

Mary: Sounds lovely

[ they both exit to separate sides of the stage, the lights dim and then come back up, 

[Jeremy enters, wearing a slightly different outfit. He sits. Now casually. Expecting something]

[Mary enters, wearing a slightly different outfit, she is looking forward to today knowingly]

Mary: Jeremy

Jeremy: Mary 

[they begin to vigorously make out, and fall behind the bench and bushes, nothing is heard for a moment and then Passerby walks by casually, they walk behind the bench and are shocked by what they see. They continue walking] 

[Mary jumps up from behind the bench, hype about what just happened. Jeremy crawls out around utterly exhausted and also content] 

Mary: Wonderful

Jeremy: Always a pleasure

Mary: Tuesday work for you? 

Jeremy: Actually Wednesday would be better

Mary: Sounds good

[ they exit opposite sides of the stage, the lights dim and come back up]

[mary enters first, she is nervous as she was on the first date, she sits]

[jeremy enters, he is looking forward to what he thinks will happen] 

Jeremy: mary! 

Mary: Jeremy? [pause] Would you want to get some dinner some time? 

Jeremy: Oh! I uh

Mary: the third date i mean. You know. 

[Jeremy is surprised and looks uncertain, mary gives him the eyes]

Jeremy: [smiling honestly] Well alright 

[ He goes in for a kiss, and instead grabs her hand and they exit the stage together.]

[ As the exit the passerby is walk across the stage the other way]

Passerby: What strange people. 

[he rests on the bench and eats an apple, the show ends and he remains]

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